Lose Bet And Be My Slave.........Heather Dominates Andrew

[andrew_b]

Click here to read the completed story without user comments! (http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=259138)


I am going to be starting story soon, basically it's going to be running in the same timeline as 'Emma & Jennifer Do Dares'. If you haven't already, please check it out

http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=37474

also check out the first two storys too 'Lose Bet And Be My Slave' and 'Emma's Revenge'. You sort of need to read them to get the back story and fully get the story. Anyways this is enough of me jabbering on. I'll get writing on this story asap, promise.

[andrew_b]

Part 1

*Heather texts Andrew, the text reads "I want you, come to my house at 9 o clock tonight, my parents will be out for about three hours. So we'll have the house to ourselves". Andrew contemplated whether to go or not, on one hand he didn't want to see again after the revenge incident but also she was never one to throw away an easy lay. He thought about it some more and decided he was desperate to get laid. He had been dry for 2 months now and it was start to look hopeless for him to get any. He met up with Heather at the time she said*

Heather: Your late
Andrew: No i'm not
Heather: By my watch you are
Andrew: Okay
Heather: Come on already
Andrew: So you said you wanted me?
Andrew: What for?
Heather: Oh I don't think you got what I meant, I WANT you.
*Andrew acting stupid*
Andrew: Oh nice
Heather: So you wanna pleasure me?
Andrew: Of course I do
*Andrew was already getting a slight semi*
Andrew: Right so what we waiting for?
Heather: Well if we are going to do this, we are doing it my way
Andrew: Okay, what did you have in mind?
*Heather sits down on the couch in sitting room*
Heather: Now strip for me
Andrew: What?
Heather: You heard me and don't be shy, I've seen little Andrew plenty of times before
*Andrew first takes off jacket, then lifts his shirt up and takes it off, then she takes off his shoes and socks. He undoes his belt buckle and pulls it around his waist and put it's with the rest. He then slips his jeans off, dropping them to the floor*
Heather: Okay now the boxers and quickly we don't have all night
Andrew: You promise we'll have sex?
Heather: Yes of course, now pull them down
*Andrew quickly pulls the boxers all the way to floor and frees them from his legs*
Heather: Very good
Heather: Now take my hand
*Andrew takes Heather's hand and she leads him to her bedroom*
Heather: Okay now lie on the bed
*Andrew does so, with his hands on head and cock standing in attention*
Heather: No no, thats not right
Heather: Wait their
*Heather goes out to the other room and Andrew fantasies about how good this is gonna be*
Heather: Okay i'm back, now spread your legs wide
Andrew: Why?
Heather: I wanna tie you up
Andrew: Oh no, not again
Heather: Fine you can leave if you want you but we both know your too desperate to do that
*Andrew knew she was right*
Andrew: Okay fine tie me
*Heather begins to tie his ankles to the bed*
Heather: I don't know why your even complaining, I mean I'm gonna be the one doing all the work
Andrew: Yeah true
*Heather finishes tying Andrew up*
Heather: Thats better, i'm pretty sure your tight in their
Heather: Try to break free
*Andrew wiggles around a bit*
Andrew: I can't
Heather: No no, like really try and break free
Andrew: Oh right
*Andrew uses all of his strength to try and break free*
Andrew: Yeah I really can't, I guess I'm all yours now
Heather: Perfect cause thats exactly what you are
Andrew: What am I?
Heather: Your my slave now :)
Andrew: Ha good one
Heather: You thinking i'm kidding?
Andrew: Well yeah, you are right?
Heather: Oh no, i'm deadly serious
Andrew: Oh right

To Be Continued

[MasterOmega]

Lol. Heather is such a little devil. Can't wait to see how this one turns out.

[andrew_b]

Lol. Heather is such a little devil. Can't wait to see how this one turns out.

Oh yes she is but serves Andrew right, he should have known what she was gonna do

[zeddicus]

Oh yes she is but serves Andrew right, he should have known what she was gonna do

in a certain way he does know, i mean he is character you made up, you know he knows lol
anyway nice going

greets zeddi

[andrew_b]

in a certain way he does know, i mean he is character you made up, you know he knows lol
anyway nice going

greets zeddi

thats exactly it, he knows Heather very well and knows what she is like but secretly wants it to happen

[andrew_b]

Part 2:

Heather: Now I need to teach you some manners
Andrew: Why?
Heather: Cause you've been awful naughty
Andrew: Oh yes I have ;)
Heather: You think this is funny
Andrew: A little bit yes
Heather: You won't be laughing when it's over
Heather: First I have some rules
Andrew: Oh really?
Heather: Yes number 1 you must call me mistress at all times once we have started, number 2 you must listen and obey my every command without question, number 3 you can only speak when spoken to, number 4 i must always cum first unless i say otherwise and also you can only cum when i say
Failure to follow any of these rules will result in strict punishment.
Andrew: Are you serious?
Heather: I'm deadly serious and we have started our session now and straight away you've broken two rules but i'll let you off them since their is a much more important issue to deal with
Andrew: Which is what?
Heather: First Andrew I told you already call me mistress, you will be punished immediately
*Heather smacks the inside of Andrew's thigh*
Andrew: Ouch
Heather: Okay now obey me or it will get much worse
Andrew: Yes mistress
Heather: Good you've begun to see my way
Heather: Now time to punish you for thinking i'm easy
Andrew: I don't think that mistress
Heather: Oh really?
Andrew: No I would never think that mistress
Heather: Somehow I don't believe that
Andrew: But I'm telling the truth mistress
Heather: Your lying is just making it worse, so just tell me the truth
Andrew: Okay yes mistress, I did think you were easy
Heather: Good boy
Heather: Was that so hard?
Andrew: No mistress
Heather: Okay now to begin discipline you
Andrew: Okay mistress
Heather: Hmm let start with this
*Heather smacks Andrew's belly*
Andrew: Ouch
Heather: Hmm no that won't work, no point hurting myself
Heather: I'll be right back
*Andrew now had a number of confusing emotions running through his head, fear of what Heather would do to him, horny cause for whatever reason it was a massive turn on, also angry cause she had tricked him, before he could think about it Heather was back and now fear became the biggest emotion as she came back in with his belt*
Heather: This work should work
*Heather strikes Andrew's belly with the belt*
*Andrew shouts a curse word loudly*
Heather: No no, no cursing
*Heather hits Andrew again but harder*
Andrew: AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
*Heather continues hitting Andrew eight more times*
Heather: You may beg for mercy now
Andrew: Please Mistress stop, I can't take anymore
Heather: Hmm not good enough
*Heather hits five more times*
Heather: Okay since your such a pussy i'll give you a break
Andrew: Thank you Mistress
Heather: How does your cock feel now?
Andrew: Like it's about to explode Mistress
Heather: Would you like me touch it?
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: Where are your manners?
Andrew: Yes please mistress
Heather: Okay since your asked
*Heather grazes her hand over the top of Andrew's cock, she makes it moves to one side and then it bobs to the other side until eventually it stops in the middle*
Andrew: AHHHHHH!
Heather: Do you wanna cum?
Andrew: More then anything Mistress
Heather: Well your gonna have to earn it
Andrew: Okay Mistress
*Heather begins to smack Andrew's belly ten more times and by the end it is now completely red*
Heather: God your belly looks awfully embarrassed
Andrew: Thats not funny Mistress
Heather: No backtalk
*Heather smacks Andrew again*
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: So how bad do you wanna cum now?
Andrew: So bad, I would just be glad if you touch me again though Mistress
Heather: Okay I can do that
*Heather grabs a good grip of Andrew's cock and to Andrew feels like she is trying to squeeze the cum out*
Andrew: Please let me cum Mistress
Heather: No
*She flicks Andrew's balls*
Heather: Thats better, now hopefully you've understood not to talk back
Andrew: Yes I have Mistress
Heather: Good
*Heather lets go of Andrew's cock again and lets it bob around for a bit, no doubt to Andrew this feels like the longest hard on he has every had without being touched and stroked properly. He trys to push that thought out of his head since he knows it's making things worse but he can't help it*
Heather: Hmm What to do now

To Be Continued

[Demon Thief]

Wow....This is probably the best you've ever written. :D

[andrew_b]

Part 3

Heather: Oh I have an idea
*Heather going into the other room, to fetch something in the other room. Andrew is now at breaking point, he doesn't even care about his cock exploding cum all over the place, he just wants away but he knows if he does cum things will get much worse. Heather returns into the room*
Heather: I've got something for you
Andrew: What are you gonna do with that? Mistress
Heather: You'll see
*Heather pulls the foreskin upward and places a clothepin on it*
Andrew: AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH
Heather: That should stop you from cumming
Andrew: But Mistress I need to cum so bad
Heather: Tough and now if you cum it's possible that you might tear the skin, so no doubt you won't
Heather: Right?
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: Good cause I need to pleasure myself and I don't want you cumming and ruining my time
*Andrew thoughts turn to dread*
Heather: I know you've been looking forward to this but I'm not gonna let you enjoy it
*Heather takes off her top*
Andrew: Oh no
Heather: Oh yes
*Heather removes her bra*
Heather: What you think?
Andrew: Wow
Heather: Wanna feel?
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: Okay
*Heather rubs her breasts against Andrew's dick. Andrew now rueing the choice he had made. It was driving him crazy*
*Heather kicks off her shoes*
Heather: He he this fun
*Heather slips off her jeans*
*She then climbs on top of Andrew and comes close to his mouth and sticks out her tongue*
Heather: Actually no
*She gets off Andrew and takes off her panties*
Heather: Now your gonna watch me cum, whether you like it or not
*Heather was already pretty wet from all of this and Andrew's dick was filling up with pre-cum*
Heather: Hmm, I think I'll need help from my friend
*Heather takes out her vibrator from her dresser*
Heather: I wanna cum now
*She sets it to max*
Heather: Oh their we go
Heather: How are you doing slave?
Andrew: Oh my god, not very good Mistress
Heather: It shouldn't be long now
*The room goes silent except for the sound of Heather's vibrator but slowly Heather begins moan loader and loader, until eventually she screaming*
Heather: Oh come on, cum
Heather: Oh yes
Heather: BASTARD!
*She begins panting*
Heather: Oh my god
Heather: Oh my god
Heather: Here it comes
Andrew: Oh no
*Heather squirts all over the chair*
Heather: Ah thats better
*Heather turns off the vibrator*
Heather: Oh you didn't cum, I'm impressed
Andrew: So wait, you expected me to rip my cock apart Mistress
Heather: Well not really but I know when it's totally unbearable for you and you really have to cum
Andrew: Okay thank you for looking out for me I guess Mistress
Heather: Hmm, I think you deserve a treat
*Heather takes off the clothepin from Andrew's dick*
Andrew: Ah thank you Mistress
Heather: Your welcome
*Heather begins to stroke Andrew*
Andrew: What are you doing Mistress?
Heather: Stroking your cock
Andrew: Thank you that feels nice Mistress
Heather: But don't forget, only cum when I say
Heather: Okay?
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: Good
*Heather now speeds up her movement and then stops*
Heather: He he I love to tease
Andrew: I know Mistress
*Heather pulls Andrew's foreskin all the way up and Andrew whole body moves*
Heather: Looks like you really need to cum
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: What would you do for me if I let you
Andrew: I would do anything
Heather: Anything?
Andrew: Yes
Heather: Hmm okay, I'll be right back
Andrew: Okay Mistress
*Heather heads into the other room again and returns with a peace of paper and a pen*
Heather: I will release your right hand and you will sign this
Heather: Okay?
Andrew: Yes Mistress
*Heather releases Andrew's hand and he quickly signs the piece of paper and Heather re-ties Andrew's hand*
Heather: Okay now you can cum when you wish
Andrew: Will you help me Mistress please?
Heather: Well since you said please
*Heather begins to stroke Andrew again and gradually gets up to the pace she was at before and it didn't take more then a minute for Andrew to cum all over her hand*
Heather: tut tut, bad slave, clean my hand
*Heather puts her hand in front of Andrew's face and he is forced to lick it clean*
Heather: Well thats enough for today
*Heather gets dressed*
Andrew: Are you gonna release me?
Heather: Oh right yes
*Heather unties Andrew*
Heather: You can get dressed now
Andrew: You know the evening doesn't have to stop here
Heather: Well sort of does since my parents are coming home soon
Andrew: Okay
*Andrew quickly gets dressed*
Heather: I'll lead you to the door
Andrew: Oh what did I sign earlier?
Andrew: Anything important?
Heather: No nothing, just wanted to see if you would do it
Andrew: Ah okay, well bye
Heather: Bye

To Be Continued

[andrew_b]

Wow....This is probably the best you've ever written. :D

Wow....Thanks for the amazing comment

[Demon Thief]

Are you being sarcastic?

[andrew_b]

Are you being sarcastic?

no sorry, wasn't meaning to be but reading back i can see how you think it was

[fitzy]

any chance he signed somthing she can blackmail him with to be her slave

[andrew_b]

I'm actually sort of stuck now, not sure which story to continue first. Which would people prefer?

[dragonator]

continue this one please!

[fitzy]

both am really enjoying them but at moment want to know what he signed more then what the dare will be like in other

[andrew_b]

both am really enjoying them but at moment want to know what he signed more then what the dare will be like in other

yeah i've continued the other, so will get the part on this written soon

[fitzy]

i read the latest bit of other when do you think youll get next post up

[andrew_b]

i read the latest bit of other when do you think youll get next post up

soon, i've got dare idea, just need to figure out how to get it to work and also need to see who is gonna win, might wait till a couple more vote before posting

[andrew_b]

Part 4

(a week later)
*Heather texts Andrew "Don't forgot to come over tonight, same time as last week". Andrew rings Heather*
Heather: Hi
Andrew: Em I'm not really in the mood tonight, can we take a rain check?
Heather: Andrew, I don't think you get how serious this is.
Heather: You will come over tonight, or else
Andrew: Or else what?
Heather: I'll take legal action
Andrew: Ha how are you gonna do that?
Heather: You signed a contract, remember?
Heather: Or was your dick doing all the thinking as usual
Andrew: I don't follow
Heather: You signed a contract agreeing to be my slave for four weeks and you must come over to my house at the same time every week.
Andrew: Yeah but I wasn't in the right state of mind
Heather: Doesn't matter you signed it
Andrew: I don't believe you
Heather: Want me to send you a copy?
Andrew: Fine
Heather: Okay sent
*Andrew goes to the computer and signs into his hotmail and then reads contract. When gets to the bottom he notices his signature their. It was written very clearly and it was his signature*
Andrew: You can't do this
Heather: But I can and I did
Andrew: I'll take you to court, I was in a right state of mind
Heather: Fine but either way, do want people knowing that signed up to this and also that you do this type of stuff
Andrew: No
Heather: Good
Heather: I think it's better for both of us that you don't say anything to anyone
Andrew: Okay fine I won't tell if you won't tell
Heather: Good, at least we've reached an agreement
Heather: Oh and don't worry, you've only got three weeks left
Heather: Last week counts as the first week
Andrew: Okay good
Heather: So I will see you tonight?
Andrew: Yes
Heather: Yes what?
Andrew: Yes mistress
Heather: Good boy and don't be late tonight or I will punish you
Andrew: I won't mistress
Heather: Good slave

To Be Continued

[Demon Thief]

Interesting update. :D

[andrew_b]

Interesting update. :D

had to make it into a situation where he had no way out and also keep the story believable

[andrew_b]

Part 5

*Andrew nervously headed over to Heather's house. He looked at his watch at it read "8:47". He decided it was best to hurry up, he was sure he arrived on time last week but figured his watch must be slow. When he arrived his watch read "8.55". Ringing the bell, the dread was getting larger.*
Heather: Oh good your early
Andrew: Hi
Heather: Okay come inside, getting undressed and I'll meet you in my bedroom
Heather: I just wanna freshen up
*Andrew thought it best for him to just comply. He undressed and entered Heather's bedroom and sat on her bed and waited for her to come in*
Heather: Well this won't do
Andrew: What?
Heather: Your clothes
Andrew: What do you mean, I took them off
Heather: Yes but leave them outside in future
Andrew: Okay
Heather: We have started now, so call me Mistress
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: Good boy
*Heather throws Andrew's clothes into the other room*
Heather: Okay lie down while I tie you up
Andrew: Yes Mistress
*Heather ties Andrew's legs and arms to the bed, she begins pacing around the bed*
Heather: It seems you don't understand how serious I was last week
Andrew: What do you mean Mistress?
Heather: I mean, I told you to obey me and early you weren't exactly complying
Andrew: Sorry Mistress
Heather: It's too late for apologizes
*Heather pulls out a whip from her wardrobe*
Heather: You will be punished
*Heather smacks Andrew's chest with whip*
Andrew: Ouch :(
Heather: Oh trust me, it's gonna get a lot worse, so you better just get used to it
Andrew: Okay Mistress
Heather: No more talking until I say
*Andrew nods*
Heather: Good
*Heather hits Andrew another nineteen times*
Heather: Do that hurt slave?
*Andrew nods*
Heather: Not enough for me though, I want you to be bleed
*Heather continues hitting and eventually around about the thirty five hits mark, a trace of blood trickles down Andrew's side*
Heather: You may speak now
Andrew: Thank you Mistress
Heather: You been bad but hopefully by now you have learned your lesson, right?
Andrew: Yes Mistress, I'll never do it again
Heather: Good but just make sure. I have a test for you
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: I will hit you one more time and if you don't make a sound, I'll give you a treat.
Andrew: Thank you Mistress
Heather: You ready?
Andrew: Yes Mistress
*Andrew figured it couldn't be any worse then it had been before but Heather caught him unaware and hit him swiftly in the balls with the whip. Andrew wanted to scream out all the curse words in his head, sweat pouring from his face and somehow containing his rage he calmed down. They were still paining him but he knew it would be worth it*
Heather: Hmm very good slave
Heather: I'm impressed
Andrew: Thank you Mistress
Heather: Just wait their, I need get changed and get something in the other room
*Andrew now could finally begin to realise the pain in his balls but then he quickly forgot about it, since he kept telling himself that it would be worth it*

To Be Continued

[andrew_b]

Part 6

*Heather re-enters and sight that greets Andrews eyes is truely amazing*
Heather: So are you ready?
Andrew: Wow
Heather: Slave I asked you a question, are you ready?
Andrew: Oh yes Mistress
*Heather wearing a sheer black top with a black bra underneath, sheer black nylon stockings with suspenders, black panties that are skinny around the pussy area and finished off with shiny black high heels*
Heather: Do you like my outfit?
Andrew: Yes Mistress :D
Heather: Okay before we start, of course i'm gonna put this on you
*Heather slides condom onto Andrew's rock hard cock*
Andrew: Ah :(
Heather: I've changed, I had a scare couple of months back.
Andrew: I'm sorry Mistress
Heather: No need to dwell on it.
*Heather gets onto the bed with Andrew and whispers in his ear*
Heather: So tell me, how bad do you want it?
Andrew: Oh so bad Mistress
Heather: Hmm I don't know.
Heather: Last time we did this I remember you being premature.
Andrew: I promise Mistress, it won't happen.
Heather: I'm still not sure but I suppose since you held off quite long before.
Heather: I think you've proved you can hold it.
Andrew: I have Mistress
Heather: Hmm
*Heather sits on Andrew belly*
Heather: Tell me again, out loud. What you want to do to me.
*Andrew takes breath*
Andrew: I want to fuck you.
Heather: Louder.
*Andrew screams at the top of his lungs*
Andrew: I WANT TO FUCK YOU.
Heather: he he, no need to shout.
*Heather slides down Andrew's body, making his dick go under and then pop out the other side*
Heather: I think you've waiting long enough
*Heather slips back her panties to show her glorious wet pussy. She then slowly moves it on top of Andrew's cock*
Heather: How does that feel?
Andrew: mmm very nice Mistress
Heather: Good, well since your quite stuck. I guess i'll have to do the moving
*Heather begins gently slipping her body over Andrew, her pussy rubbing against his cock*
Heather: mmm thats nice, enjoying it slave?
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: Good
*Heather continues stroking his cock with pussy, moving it and out. She starts building a bit of speed up*
*Heather moans*
*She then slows down again, Andrew now begins to worry since he knows he hasn't got long before he blows his load. He just hopes that he can hold off long enough*
*Heather slides her body up, letting Andrew's cock to move freely again*
Heather: How are you doing slave?
Andrew: I'm fine Mistress.
Heather: Good cause If your gonna cum tell me and we will stop right now.
*Andrew now only thinking about how great it is to be having sex again*
Andrew: I won't Mistress promise.
Heather: Good.
*Heather slips her pussy on top of Andrew's cock again, she builds up pace again and now at this point she is bouncing on Andrew's cock*
Heather: Oh yes.
Heather: mmmmmm.
Heather: Come on.
*All Andrew had to do was concentrate on not cumming before Heather*
Heather: Oh my god.
Heather: Yes.
*splat*
............
Heather: You bastard.
Heather: I was so close.
Andrew: I'm sorry Mistress.
Heather: I'm so disappointed in you.
Heather: It's too late
*Heather unties Andrew*
Heather: You may dipose of the condom yourself
Andrew: Yes Mistress
*Andrew slips it off and is about to put it in the bin*
Heather: Not in here, you put it in the bin when you are going outside.
Andrew: Yes Mistress
*Heather and Andrew walk into the main room*
Heather: Okay slave, It seems you don't understand me.
Andrew: I do Mistress
Heather: But I told distinctly not to cum before me.
Andrew: Yes Mistress :(
Heather: For that you can only wear one item of clothing of your choice.
Andrew: Please Mistress, I'll behave, I swear.
Heather: Too late
Andrew: Okay I pick my t-shirt
Heather: But it's cold out, not wanna pick your jacket?
Andrew: No, the t-shirt will cover up more
Heather: Okay fine, whatever you want, I'm holding onto the other clothes that are left.
Heather: You can take your keys from your jacket if you wish.
Andrew: Noted
*Andrew gets his keys from his jacket and put on his t-shirt. The t-shirt covered his dick and ass just barely but any movement made them in clear view*
Heather: You better be off now
Andrew: Yes Mistress
*Andrew opens door and runs to his car, he felt comforted inside. At least no one could see how bare he was. He drove home thinking about the night and for the most part he really enjoying. He was happy to end his dry streak.*
*When he arrived at his apartment complex most of the lights were out, so chances were he wouldn't be seen*
*He went up the stairs to his apartment and arrived at door carefully putting the key in the door. Hopefully no one would be up and luckily something went right for him and they had gone to bed early. He went to bed shortly after, dreading next week's session with Mistress Heather*

To Be Continued

[Demon Thief]

Impressive. I wonder what she's going to have him do next.

[Mr Very Daring]

It's quite a good contrast between your other stories which is good because it makes it different and not repetitive

[andrew_b]

It's quite a good contrast between your other stories which is good because it makes it different and not repetitive

well it's similar to the first but more extreme

[Roll,ova,and,beg]

Great story post soon

[Hardstyle]

I love it i cant wait

[Star Shadows]

this is a lot better than the other stories you have written :) *big thumbs up*

[andrew_b]

this is a lot better than the other stories you have written :) *big thumbs up*

thanks a lot :D, glad people like it

[andrew_b]

Part 7

*another week passes by and Andrew nervous heads over to Heather's house, thankfully for him he is half way through his four weeks with Heather. He just wants it to end cause he knows it's gonna get worse before it gets better. He knocks on the door*
Heather: Oh their you are, at least your on time
Andrew: Hello to you too
Heather: Hi
Heather: Okay strip off and go inside
*Andrew makes his way inside*
Heather: I don't you heard me correctly, strip first and then come inside
Andrew: Are you kidding?
Heather: Do it now and quickly
*Andrew takes off his jacket and shirt with ease, next he takes off his shoes, socks and jeans.*
Heather: Undies too, I'm not letting you inside until then
Andrew: Fine
*Andrew takes off his underwear*
Heather: Okay now come in and leave your clothes in the sitting room and come with me into the bedroom
*Andrew drops his clothes on the couch in the sitting room and Heather leads him into the bedroom*
Heather: Okay you know the drill, on the bed
*Andrew lies on the bed with his usual hands on head*
Heather: No no, on your back
*Andrew rolls over*
Heather: Good, I'm gonna tie you as usual so don't move
*Heather ties up Andrew and Andrew's hard on is now pressing into the mattress*
Heather: Good, now I need to punish you for last week mostly but also you seemed hesitant to strip for me.
Andrew: Sorry Mistress
Heather: Though I accept your apology, you still need to be punished
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: Ever tried anal?
Andrew: Em no Mistress, I'm not gay
Heather: You know you don't have to be gay to try it
Heather: Just you wait their and I'll be back
Andrew: Okay Mistress
*Heather leaves the room and now Andrew begins to sweat, dreading whatever Heather has planned for him. Heather re-enters with a glove on her right hand but Andrew cannot see since he is face down*
Heather: Okay slave, you ready?
Andrew: No Mistress
Heather: Too bad
*Heather slides her middle finger inside Andrew's butt hole*
Heather: How do that feel slave?
Andrew: It's not too bad Mistress
Heather: Good
*Heather wiggles her finger around and Andrew makes a weird sound*
Heather: Like that slave?
Andrew: Yes actually Mistress
Heather: Good
*Heather slides her finger out and Andrew's body shakes a little*
Heather: Okay, how about the whole hand now then?
Andrew: Okay Mistress :(
*Heather clenches her fist and slowly slides it inside Andrew*
Andrew: Ah, that hurts
Heather: It's supposed to
*Heather slides her hand in further, until she can't go anymore*
Heather: How does that feel slave?
Andrew: It's not so bad now that it's in
Heather: Good
*Heather quickly takes her hand out*
Andrew: Ouch! :(
Heather: He he, your hole is huge now
Heather: I wanna stick something bigger in it, ready slave?
Andrew: I guess
Heather: Good, this is payback for cumming early on me last week
*Heather puts on her strap on*
Heather: And I'm not lubbing it up, you get know what it's like for me when you fuck me
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: Okay I'll start off slow
*Heather slides the dildo inside slowly and carefully*
Heather: I don't care how much it hurts, it's all going in
Andrew: Yes Mistress
*Heather gets half way with the dildo in*
Heather: Okay I'll take it out, since I don't think your quite ready for it all just yet
*Heather slides it out and walks around to Andrew's face*
Heather: Okay now suck it
Andrew: Yes Mistress :(
*Heather puts the dildo in Andrew's mouth and makes him suck it*
Heather: Good slave
*Heather pets Andrew*
Heather: Now the whole lot, I wanna make you gag
*Heather slides the dildo further inside Andrew's mouth. Andrew wanted to just vomit all over it but just gags instead*
Heather: Okay thats enough
*Heather takes the dildo out and go back around to Andrew's ass*
Heather: Okay now it's going all the way in
Andrew: Mistress may I have permission to barf
Heather: Permission denied
Andrew: :(
*Heather spanks Andrew's ass really hard*
Heather: Thats for interupting me
*Heather slides the dildo into Andrew's ass again and this time slowly but surely gets it all inside*
Heather: How does that feel slave, you have 7 inches of plastic in your ass
Andrew: It's very painful Mistress
Heather: I'm glad
*Heather now begins slides it in and out, gradually getting faster each time*
Heather: Mmm this is good, I now get why guys enjoy this so much
Andrew: Mistress this hurts so much, please stop
Heather: NO, not until I decide
Andrew: Okay Mistress
*Heather now quickens her pace and Andrew's insides begin to throb*
Heather: Oh yes, here we go
Heather: Come on bitch, take it like a man
*Andrew now close to tears as the pain is unbearable*
Heather: Mmm
Heather: Yes
Heather: Oh yes
*Heather picks her pace once more, she is now sweating from the effort of pumping the dildo in and out*
Heather: Oh my god
Heather: Fuck yes
*Heather screams in glory as she orgasms*
Heather: *sigh* thats better
*Heather takes out the dildo and takes it off also*
Heather: Okay, I just have one more thing I want to do before we finish for tonight
*Heather goes into the room again and comes back with Andrew's belt in hand*
Heather: I'll hit you ten times with this and if you can keep quite, I'll let you go
Andrew: Okay Mistress, I'll keep quite
Heather: You better
*Heather strikes Andrew's already hurt ass with belt*
Heather: Good, not a peep
*Heather continues and hits Andrew's ass nine more times, Andrew's ass is now so red that it's beginning to blister*
Heather: Okay good, you didn't whine so I'm done with you for tonight
*Heather unties Andrew*
Heather: Okay now go and get out of my sight
*Andrew gets dressed and goes home*

To Be Continued

[Hardstyle]

I am soo excited for the next one good job on this part !

[surnamey]

AMAZING!! Can't wait for the rest

[andrew_b]

Again thanks for comments people :D

[Demon Thief]

Nice one. I can't wait to see what happens next.

[Roll,ova,and,beg]

yeah I think its just great too

[andrew_b]

Yeah I have a plot twist coming in the next chapter, again just wanna finish up next part on other story

[fitzy]

after reading updated in both stories very good am still enjoying them both

[andrew_b]

Part 8

(week later)
*Heather rings Jennifer*
Heather: Hey Jen can you come over I really to talk about something
Jennifer: I would but I've got to over to Chris's in like ten minutes
Heather: Please Jennifer, i need to talk to someone
Jennifer: Okay I'll pop in for a couple of minutes on my way to Chris's
*Jennifer gets herself ready for the threesome with Chris and Emma. She has been patiently waiting all week for this and secretly she had wanted it a lot longer then that. She then headed out towards Chris's and then detoured to Heather's house*
Heather: Thanks for coming over
Jennifer: So whats wrong
*Heather sighs*
Jennifer: Come on, spit it out
Heather: I think i'm falling for Andrew again
Jennifer: Oh come on, don't go down that road again
Heather: I can't help it, I still love him
Jennifer: He dumped you in front of all of us, what makes you think he wants you
Heather: I have my reasons
Jennifer: You had sex with him, didn't you
Heather: No
Jennifer: Come on Heather, most people don't know you all that well but I do
Jennifer: And I know when your lying
Heather: Fine yes, we had sex
Jennifer: So just sex?
Heather: Yes
Jennifer: How many times do I have to tell you, stop confusing sex with feelings
Jennifer: You'll just end up hurt again
Heather: Sorry, I can't help it
Jennifer: I know you still love him but seriously you need stop cause even a few flings won't change how he feels about you
Heather: Well I think your wrong
Jennifer: Fine think like that but I really have to go now
Heather: I'm sorry, I should listen to you, you always seem to know whats best for me
Jennifer: Yeah and if you need to talk again about this, I'm always here for you
Heather: Thanks, bye
Jennifer: Bye

To Be Continued

[Roll,ova,and,beg]

I like it how you put both stories together kinda

[andrew_b]

I like it how you put both stories together kinda

yeah the storyline is pretty much the same cause their are gonna become one story eventually

[andrew_b]

Part 9

*Heather patiently waits for Andrew to come over, trying to figure in her head in the feelings are real or not. She sat their for about a half hour and then Andrew arrived*

Andrew: Hi
Heather: Hey
Andrew: Will I get undressed
Heather: Of course, I'd expect you to know that by now
Andrew: Okay
*Andrew then undressed and began heading towards the bedroom*
Heather: Oh we are doing something different tonight
Andrew: Oh?
Heather: Here take this
*Heather hands Andrew a note*
Andrew: Whats this?
Heather: They are tasks I want you to do and if you get them done in the next hour I promise a reward and just cause we aren't in the bedroom doesn't mean you stop calling me Mistress
Andrew: Yes Mistress
*Andrew looked at the note and it read
1. Make me food
2. Clean my bedroom
3. Take out trash
4. Clean the kitchen and sitting room
5. Hoover the floor
6. Change the light bulb in bathroom*
Andrew: But these just look like chores
Heather: They are now get to it
*Andrew feeling slighty confused and quite exposed since generally he spent most of his time naked in Heather's bedroom. He wasn't so comfortable walking around naked but he thought he best get on with it since he had no another choice.*
Heather: Okay and make me some food first, I'm hungry. Nothing too extravagant, soup will do.
*Andrew took out a cup soup out from the press (cabinet) and poured it into the cup. He then filled the kettle with water and waited for it to boil. All the while Heather had her feet up watching telly but also occassionally looking across at Andrew. The kettle boiled and Andrew brought the soup into Heather. Since he wasn't doing anything exciting he was very soft, also either cause of being nude or lack of heating, he felt very cold.*
Andrew: Here is your soup Mistress
Heather: Good, now get on with your other tasks
Andrew: Yes Mistress
*Andrew decided to clean the kitchen first. It was the easiest job since Heather's mother kept the house very clean. Mostly he just had to put crisp packet and such in the bin from when Heather left it their. When he finished that he set about hoovering the place. He felt very strange hoovering in the nude, he would catch a glimpse of Heather watching him and when he would he would get a semi but not a full hard on. Their wasn't much cleaning in sitting room. Again Heather's mother kept it very clean. He was finished the kitchen and sitting room in no time and decided to go onto doing Heather's bedroom. He got a bit of a surprise this time though. It was generally quite clean all the other weeks but for some reason it wasn't so this time. It was far from a pig sty but it just surprised Andrew. I guess you could say he thought all girls rooms were perfectly clean. He got an with the job at hand. Mostly it was just putting clothes in the basket and picking up papers and packets. When he finished all of that he had 30 minutes left. He went into Heather to get the spare lightbulb.*
Andrew: Mistress I am ready to put the lightbulb in
Heather: Well go get one in the shop
Andrew: What? :eek:
Heather: I'm just kidding their is one on the table in the kitchen
*Andrew went into and quick got it and headed into the bathroom. He stood on the bath and removed the lightbulb. He again felt strange having his balls dangle as he stretched over to remove it. He then put in the new one. All he had left to do was to put out the trash and he was dreading it. Heather lived on a main road and also Andrew was cold enough being inside. He put the broke bulb in the bin and went into Heather. He had 10 minutes left*
Andrew: Okay I've done almost everything on the list Mistress
Heather: Well thats not good enough, what have you not done?
Andrew: Taking out trash Mistress
Heather: Well go on
Andrew: But it's freezing outside and their is a good chance someone will see
Heather: Do it or not getting your reward
Andrew: Okay :(
*Andrew collected all the bags from the bins and walked toward the front door. While standing in front of the door he could feel the cold wind on his feet coming through the bottom of the door. He took a big breath and opened the door and not wanting to just stand their he quickly ran to the trashcan. When he got back inside he was shivering. He didn't even know if someone saw but frankly didn't care. He was gonna get his reward*
Andrew: Okay I've done all my tasks Mistress
Heather: Good boy, okay sit down on the chair for me
Andrew: Okay Mistress
Heather: Close your eyes and I will tell you when to open them
*Andrew sat down on the chair fairly relaxed and closed his eyes. He wasn't long waiting on his reward. Within a couple of seconds he felt Heather's warm hand touch his very withered penis but it quickly perked up. Andrew thought to himself "great i'm getting a handjob" but then once Andrew was hard, he then felt Heather's lips wrap around his cock. He was in seventh heaven. Never before had Heather given him a blowjob. Heather then moved her mouth off his cock*
Heather: Okay you may open them now
*Andrew opened his eyes at the sight of Heather stroking him.*
Heather: Okay you can cum when you like now and I will swallow
*Heather continued to blow Andrew and he was climaxing fast. She then began licking Andrew's tip*
Andrew: Oh my god
Andrew: Yes
*Andrew then exploded into Heather's mouth and true to her word. Heather swallowed it all down*
Heather: Mmm tasty :)
Andrew: Thank you Mistress
Heather: Well since it was our last week, I thought I'd make it special
Andrew: Oh yeah it is
*Both of them were secretly disappointed that it would be over but then Heather gave Andrew another offer*
Heather: Hey do you wanna continue this?
Andrew: Are you serious?
Heather: Yes
Andrew: I dunno really
Heather: You've got to admit, you enjoyed yourself
Andrew: Mostly yes
Heather: Wanna be my full time slave?
Andrew: I'm really not sure
Heather: I tell you what, how about this
Heather: We do a full week and if you don't like it, we can stop
Andrew: That sounds good
Heather: I can get a contract written up if you are really interested
Andrew: I'll have to have a think about it
Heather: Yeah sure, take as much time as you need
Andrew: Will do
*Andrew then got dressed*
Heather: Okay well I guess I'll see you again then
Andrew: Yeah maybe
Heather: Bye
Andrew: Bye

To Be Continued

[andrew_b]

p.s. sorry for not posting for a while, just been busy lately, just letting you know might be bigger gaps in story add ons in both stories

[Roll,ova,and,beg]

okay and also you put Jennifers bedroom instead of Heathers

[andrew_b]

okay and also you put Jennifers bedroom instead of Heathers

sorry about that, i think cause i'm going back and forth i seem to be making typo mistakes often.

[Roll,ova,and,beg]

sorry about that, i think cause i'm going back and forth i seem to be making typo mistakes often.

thats okay as long as we get to read them!

[andrew_b]

thats okay as long as we get to read them!

sweet well the other story will be continued next, i know what happening in it so will definitely be up this week but could be the end of the week

[Roll,ova,and,beg]

sweet well the other story will be continued next, i know what happening in it so will definitely be up this week but could be the end of the week

okay thanks can't wait

[andrew_b]

Part 10

*The next Wednesday*
*Andrew rings Heather*

Andrew: Hi
Heather: Hello
Andrew: I'm thinking about taking you up on your offer
Heather: Okay, whats holding you back?
Andrew: I'm just not sure.
Heather: Okay well I don't want to force you into this, I've just got to tell you. If you thought what we did before was hard then don't bother.
Andrew: Well I thought before was kinda hard but was fun.
Heather: Oh really?
Andrew: I'm thinking I want more.
Heather: Oh
Andrew: If you draw up a contract then i can come over and sign it.
Heather: Seriously?
Andrew: Yes
Heather: Well it take me long to draw it up so if you wanna come over now then that would be good.
Andrew: Cool, i'll do that.
Andrew: See ya soon.
Heather: Okay bye
Andrew: Bye
*Andrew gets in his car and drives over to Heather's. In the meantime Heather is ecstatic as she gets Andrew for another week. She already had the contract drawn up, so all she had to do was take it out of the drawer.
Andrew arrives at Heather's*
Andrew: Hi :)
Heather: Hi, so your really sure you want to do this?
Andrew: Yes, totally
*Heather hands Andrew the contract and a pen. Andrew signs it.*
Heather: Awesome
Andrew: So when do we start this?
Heather: Lets say next Monday but we can't do it my house though.
Andrew: Oh...well I can tell Sarah to go and leave me alone in the apartment for a while
Heather: Okay cool
Heather: How about we start it next monday?
Andrew: Sounds good to me
Heather: Okay see then...then
Andrew: Yeah
Andrew: Bye
Heather: Bye
*Heather shuts door*
Heather: God your so stupid.
* "okay see you then...then" Heather says is stupid voice*
Heather: Okay calm down, surely he likes you back, otherwise he wouldn't do this.
*Heather takes a breath*

To Be Continued

[Roll,ova,and,beg]

awesome
when will this story be finished?

[andrew_b]

awesome
when will this story be finished?

very soon also, i'm hoping to have both stories finished by at the latest a months time

[rami]

http://www.blowfish.com/catalog/toys/images/t-lup-2249.jpgI'm actually sort of stuck now, not sure which story to continue first. Which would people prefer?

I like Heather to continue the story with more treatment for Andrew using butt plug, electric one, spanking his balls ....etc

http://www.blowfish.com/catalog/toys/images/t-lup-2249.jpg

[andrew_b]

I like Heather to continue the story with more treatment for Andrew using butt plug, electric one, spanking his balls ....etc

lol well just wait and see what will happen and thanks for joining getdare to post a reply, much apprieciated

[25rob1985]

Please write. More

[Roll,ova,and,beg]

yeah continue this story
its going great

[overlord]

im likin this ...its gettin intrestin now

[andrew_b]

wow thanks for the nice comments people, i will continue this at the weekend, promise

[andrew_b]

Part 11

*Sunday and Heather rings andrew*
Heather: Hey is okay if we do it at yours tomorrow?
Andrew: Em yeah i suppose
Heather: Is your house free?
Andrew: For like an hour, yeah
Heather: Great, thats plenty of time
Heather: See you tomorrow, what time is good?
Andrew: About 4-5
Heather: Okay perfect, see you then
Heather: Bye
Andrew: Bye
*Monday and Heather heads over to Andrew's place*
Heather: Hey, so you ready for this?
Andrew: I think so
Heather: Okay well you've got no choice since you've signed but just wanna prepare you, this is going to be intense.
Andrew: Sounds good
Heather: Good i'm glad your ready
Heather: Now get undressed
Andrew: Yes mistress
*Andrew is prepared and only has to take off his robe*
Heather: Oh my slave is prepared, thats good
Andrew: Thought it would be easier mistress
Heather: Okay shh now
Heather: Get down on the floor doggie style, i know you what that is
*Andrew gets down on hands and knees*
Heather: Good, now stay still, i'm going to test you
*WHACK*
Andrew: AHHHH
Heather: Come on that didn't hurt
*Heather hit Andrew with wooden cane*
Heather: Okay I'm going to keep hitting you and try and stay quiet please.
Andrew: Yes mistress
*Heather lifts the stick in the air and then rapidly brings it back down hitting Andrew in his ass in the same spot. Andrew doesn't make a sound.*
Heather: Good boy
*Heather hits again and once more Andrew stays silent.*
Heather: I'm impressed
*Heather continues hitting until Andrew's ass is bright red, at this stage Andrew is clearly struggling to keep himself together.*
Heather: Come on, scream for me boy.
*Heather hits some more and now Andrew's ass begins to blister and then Heather hits in the spot of the blister and Andrew screams out loud, he had reached his pain threshold.*
Heather: Good boy, it's nice to know that you can take a good bit of pain
Heather: How was that slave?
Andrew: It was torture mistress
Heather: Okay, well thats only the start
*Heather takes out a chain with two clips either side*
Heather: Okay now lay on your back
*Andrew lays down being careful of his burning ass.*
Heather: Okay open your mouth
*Andrew opens his mouth and Heather put in part of the chain in his mouth.*
Heather: Okay now hold it in their and keep your head back
*Andrew puts his head back and suddenly feels his nipples being stretched as Heather places the clips on them. Andrew's natural reaction was to move his head up but Heather quickly reminds him to keep it down.*
Heather: Remember keep your head back and keep the chain in your mouth.
*Heather places two pads on the soles of Andrew's feet. Andrew wondering why this was as he couldn't see what Heather was doing but soon he found out what it was. It was a electro shock generator and Heather quickly sent what felt to Andrew like all the electricity in the world through both his feet. It was a strange feeling cause he didn't know whether to laugh or cry but he kept the chain in his mouth. Heather shocked him again but this time with much less voltage but still enough to tickle him and Andrew drops the chain.*
Heather: No no, bad slave
Heather: Stand up
*Andrew stands up and the chain drops while it pulls his nipples down but Heather pulls them out in front of him.*
Heather: Does that hurt slave?
Andrew: Yes Mistress :(
Heather: Good, now if you don't behave i'll attach this to your balls
Heather: So are you going to behave?
Andrew: Yes Mistress
Heather: Hmm, put this back in your mouth and get back down on the floor.
Andrew: Yes Mistress
*Andrew resumes in the same position.*
Heather: Just incase that didn't teach you a lesson, this will.
*Heather attaches one of the pads onto Andrew's penis and gives him a small shock. It may have been only a small one but Andrew soon got the message and didn't want anymore pain in his genital region.*
Heather: Actually you can take the clips off now
Andrew: Thank you Mistress
*Andrew takes the chain out of his mouth and removes the clips. He felt very relieved but then he felt a short sharp pain as Heather hit them both with a leather strap.*
Andrew: AHHHHHHHH, please mistress stop, i can't take anymore
Heather: God your pathetic, I'm going, see you tomorrow at my place at about 5 and don't be late
Andrew: Okay mistress
*Heather packed up her things and left Andrew writhing in pain on the floor. Andrew later got up and got dressed as his parents were to be home any minute.*

To Be Continued

[andrew_b]

Part 12

*Tuesday and Heather rings Andrew*

Heather: Hey
Andrew: Hey
Heather: Come over to mine tonight my parents will be out for most of the day since they are going to a wedding.
Andrew: Okay what time?
Heather: Lets say 4 o'clock
Andrew: Okay see you then
Heather: Of course and don't be late
Andrew: I won't
Andrew: Bye
Heather: Bye

*Later on and Andrew heads over to Heather's, he is hoping for an easier night then yesterday, his balls were still very itchy after it.*

Andrew: Hi
Heather: Hello
Heather: As always strip and go into the bedroom
*Andrew strips off and heads into the bedroom and Heather follows.*
Heather: God you have a sexy ass
*Heather gives him a good hard spank*
Andrew: Ouch :(
Heather: God your such a bitch
Heather: Now lie down as usual
*Andrew lies down on the bed and Heather ties him up.*
Heather: Don't worry i'm gonna go easy on you tonight, since your a bitch i need to take it slow with you.
*Heather takes out a blindfold from the drawer.*
Heather: Yes this should work
*Heather puts the blindfold on Andrew.*
Heather: Can you see through that?
Andrew: Nope not at all Mistress
Heather: Perfect
Heather: Now lets see
*Heather has a rout through her drawers.*
Heather: Ah, their it is
*Heather takes out a pair of sound cancelling headphones and put them on Andrew.*
Heather: Can you hear me?
Andrew: ...........
Heather: I guess not.
*Heather gently strokes Andrew's leg and with the sensitive touch makes Andrew jump a little. As she moves her hand further up Andrew's leg, Andrew's cock grows larger. Heather moves her hand all the way up and touches off Andrew's balls. At this point Andrew is rock hard.*
Heather: Just the way I like it, now you won't be expecting this.
*Heather gently tickles the soles of Andrew's feet and Andrew giggles a little.*
Heather: He he, it seems your ticklish.
*Heather then tickles Andrew's underarms and Andrew laughes louder.*
Heather: It's like he forgets where he is.
*Heather then goes around Andrew's body trying to find ticklish spots and to great success. She now has Andrew laughing so hard that he is finding it hard to breath.*
Andrew: Ha ha please ha ha stop ha ha
*Andrew is now laughing hysterically and finding it harder to breath, he now has to control it as much as he can since Heather is not holding back. Heather continues this for another couple of minutes until she figures Andrew has had enough. Andrew begins to catch his breath.*
Andrew: Thank you Mistress
*Heather lifts up one of the headphones.*
Heather: Your welcome
*It goes all silent for Andrew and he doesn't feel Heather touching him anymore and now he wonders if she is even still their. He goes through weird possibilities. He thinks what if she is just their watching him or even that her and a bunch of people are watching him. This made him very hard at the though but it turned out that Heather had left to go to shops.*

To Be Continued

[andrew_b]

The next part on this story will also be the last

[fitzy]

awww why are you doing this im not gonna have anything to read now :(

[andrew_b]

awww why are you doing this im not gonna have anything to read now :(

don't worry i have an idea for a follow up story and also i'm going to be continuing cornylad's story

[fitzy]

what storys that send em link

[andrew_b]

what storys that send em link

sent you the link in p.m.

[fitzy]

thanks i like how that one has started off hopefully you will write the rest of it as good as your write these

[andrew_b]

thanks i like how that one has started off hopefully you will write the rest of it as good as your write these

ah thanks loads, it's written in my style pretty much too so shouldn't be too hard to adapt to.

[fitzy]

yeah he wrote it the exact same way you write basically like play writing

[andrew_b]

yeah he wrote it the exact same way you write basically like play writing

ha ha yeah well i was a big inspiration for him :)

[andrew_b]

Part 13 (Last Part)

*More time passes and Andrew completely losses track of time, as he lays their he gets more of a feeling that Heather has left but after he becomes sure that she has left. He feels her hand stroke his leg again and then stroke practically his whole body. The strokes work a treat as Andrew begins to grow larger and then Andrew feels Heather jump on top. He is amazed, she is really going at it. He never knew she could go this fast. The faster she goes, the closer Andrew gets to cumming and at this point Andrew expects Heather to stop, especially since she hadn't put a condom on him but no she continues and somehow up the pace even more. Andrew was so horny, it felt like he was doing it to a stranger. After all this time Andrew can't hold himself back anymore and cums deep inside her pussy. She still doesn't stop though, Andrew was now getting uncomfortable and hoping it would stop and since he couldn't hear her didn't know if she was close to orgasm or cumming. Andrew gets some relief as Heather jumps off, leaving him with time to rest for a bit but then he feels a sudden hard hit on his chest. She had hit him with his belt and very hard. She continued to hit him and he began shouting for mercy. Then she stood on top of his balls. After last night Andrew couldn't take anymore but then Heather took the headphones off and the blindfold too. The sight that met Andrew's eyes was not what he expected. Heather was very angry and was shouting at him.*

Heather: You asshole
Heather: How could you do this?
Andrew: Do what?
Heather: You know what
Andrew: Seriously Heather, I've no idea what your talking about
Heather: You have to have known
Andrew: I don't, what did I do?
Heather: You fucked my friend
Andrew: What?
Heather: Jennifer, you fucked her
Andrew: What, when
Heather: Jesus, just now you idiot
Andrew: Wait so that wasn't you
Heather: Of course it wasn't me
Andrew: Oh no, I'm so sorry Heather but I couldn't possibly known or even prevented it
Heather: I don't care, this is the end of our arrangement
*Heather took the contract and ripped it up in front of Andrew and then untied him.*
Heather: Get dressed and go, I never want to see you again
Andrew: I'm sorry but this isn't my fault
Heather: Sure it's not, *screaming at the top of her voice she says* get out.
Andrew: Okay okay, fine
*Andrew got dressed and left the house. In the meantime Heather sobbed as all her emotions came at once. So many thought in her head and she hated Andrew, she hated Jennifer but also was so confused as to how it could have happened.*

THE END?

[fitzy]

good but weird ending

[andrew_b]

good but weird ending

yeah well it's still left for the next story to take over, also check out the other story, adding both end parts at the same time

[fitzy]

read other one aswell next story probaly going to be a big fight everyone hates jennifer

[andrew_b]

yeah but to be fair to Jennifer, she had just been crushed by her friend. It doesn't justify what she did but she is still not all bad. Please rate and comment on this story and let me know what you thought about it.

[Demon Thief]

Unexpected ending, but I'll give you a10/10.

[andrew_b]

Unexpected ending, but I'll give you a10/10.

thanks demon thief appreciate it :D

[Demon Thief]

No problemo. :cool:

Hey rgjmce, have you read either one of my stories? I don't remember whether you did or didn't.

[andrew_b]

No problemo. :cool:

Hey rgjmce, have you read either one of my stories? I don't remember whether you did or didn't.

I haven't but I don't really read stories much, i don't even read over my own before i post lol