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ohne_id
12-10-2009, 01:56 PM
Me and a friend are working on a story that includes both the English and German languages. Here is part 1...

Chapter 1
The Party – Ben

“Ben, Miles, the guests are going to be here soon, get off the Xbox and come down here.” My mother shouted up to me and Miles, my friend.

I sniggered. We weren’t playing on the Xbox, or at least Miles wasn’t, I was. Miles was doing what he done best.. giving head. To me. He is one of the few of my friends who is a closeted homosexual, and feels that the rest of my friends will hate him because he is gay. I am a semi-open bisexual. My friends know, but that is all.

Miles finished off, with me out of breath, and stood up, looking pleased with himself.

“Come on, we better hurry, before we are caught” Miles said to me.

I followed the boy out of the room and down stairs, to where my party was being held. I was officially 14 years of age today. No one knew of Dylan Knebel and Frederik Lüftmacher. They attended, sat in the background. My mother had made me a large birthday cake. As soon as I made my wish, that my submissive would come to me, I blew the candles out. As I did, Knebel drew a gun, first on me, but then on Miles. I cowered, fearing more for Miles than for myself. I saw Frederik stand for a second, before running with a backpack, and Knebel chased him. I looked at my friend who was talking to himself, in a foreign language I recognised as German.

“Wie hätte er wissen können, ich hatte doch meinen Namen geändert, mein Aussehen. Es sei denn ... Frederik muss es ihm gesagt haben, aber wenn ja, warum jagte Knebel? Warum führte er nicht?” Miles said. He looked at me and ran. Was it my fault?

I thought long and hard that night. I was causing too much trouble. I had to go. I packed enough clothes for a week, and the spare blanket from my room, and left. I told my mother where I was, and that there was nothing she could say or do to get me back. I had left as a happy person, and may return one day.

Halfway to the train station, I noticed a farmiliar green jacket, belonging to Miles. When he saw me, he froze, staring into my eyes, then stood.

“I am sorry for earlier” He said to me, shaking in the chill of the winters eve.

“No need for apologies Miles, I just want to know.. who were those guys?” I responded, pulling him close to me, and sliding my hands to his limp penis.

“T-They work for my father, in Germany. They are slave hunters. My brother, Tomas, is a slave, but as father couldn’t find him, he sent me after him. The man who pulled the gun on me was Knebel. He is one of fathers “collectors”. If he has been sent after me, father must think I have failed, and therefore will sell me as a slave.. but I feel I haven’t failed.. not yet.” He replied.

I finished massaging his legs and groin area, and stood back up. I showed him two £50 notes, and enough money to change into Euro’s. We were going to Germany. Tomas never left the country.

milkdat
12-10-2009, 03:57 PM
As I told your friend, I dont really think that a German story fits on here as only a select few will really understand it. Aside from that its alright, there are quite a few grammatical errors and, German aside, it's quite hard to follow.

ohne_id
12-23-2009, 01:41 PM
It's completely in English now. Maybe a mod can merge my posts, cause I can't edit my first one.

Chapter 1
The Party – Ben

“Ben, Miles, the guests are going to be here soon, get off the Xbox and come down here.” My mother shouted up to me and Miles, my friend.
I sniggered. We weren’t playing on the Xbox, or at least Miles wasn’t, I was. Miles was doing what he done best.. giving head. To me. He is one of the few of my friends who is a closeted homosexual, and feels that the rest of my friends will hate him because he is gay. I am a semi-open bisexual. My friends know, but that is all.
Miles finished off, with me out of breath, and stood up, looking pleased with himself.
“Come on, we better hurry, before we are caught” Miles said to me.
I followed the boy out of the room and down stairs, to where my party was being held. I was officially 14 years of age today. No one knew of Dylan Knebel and Frederik Lüftmacher. They attended, sat in the background. My mother had made me a large birthday cake. As soon as I made my wish, that my submissive would come to me, I blew the candles out. As I did, Knebel drew a gun, first on me, but then on Miles. I cowered, fearing more for Miles than for myself. I saw Frederik stand for a second, before running with a backpack, and Knebel chased him. I looked at my friend who was talking to himself, in a foreign language I recognised as German.
“Wie hätte er wissen können, ich hatte doch meinen Namen geändert, mein Aussehen. Es sei denn ... Frederik muss es ihm gesagt haben, aber wenn ja, warum jagte Knebel? Warum führte er nicht?” Miles said. He looked at me and ran. Was it my fault?
I thought long and hard that night. I was causing too much trouble. I had to go. I packed enough clothes for a week, and the spare blanket from my room, and left. I told my mother where I was, and that there was nothing she could say or do to get me back. I had left as a happy person, and may return one day.
Halfway to the train station, I noticed a familiar green jacket, belonging to Miles. When he saw me, he froze, staring into my eyes, then stood.
“I am sorry for earlier” He said to me, shaking in the chill of the winters eve.
“No need for apologies Miles, I just want to know.. who were those guys?” I responded, pulling him close to me, and sliding my hands to his limp penis.
“T-They work for my father, in Germany. They are slave hunters. My brother, Tomas, is a slave, but as father couldn’t find him, he sent me after him. The man who pulled the gun on me was Knebel. He is one of fathers “collectors”. If he has been sent after me, father must think I have failed, and therefore will sell me as a slave.. but I feel I haven’t failed.. not yet.” He replied.
I finished massaging his legs and groin area, and stood back up. I showed him two £50 notes, and enough money to change into Euro’s. We were going to Germany. Tomas never left the country.



Chapter 2
The Bad Day – Tomas

“Hurry up boy” Knebel said to Tom, as he stumbled up to his master. “You may be 12, but you are still capable of doing your tasks, unless you want to turn 13 in the shed!”
Tomas knelt infront of his master and encased his lips around the flaccid penis belonging to Knebel. Tom started to caress the tip, causing Knebel to groan with pleasure.
“That will do for now” the dominant male said, with a surprisingly calm tone, “It’s time for the rehearsal. In just three weeks time I am hosting the annual Master Convention. And you are the main exhibit..”
Tom was genuinely scared now. He was going to be publically enslaved, maybe in front of his friends. He had to escape. But how
“Master” Tom softly said, looking for approval from Knebel
“What is it boy?”
“I have a friend in the town I would like to invite for tomorrow. I wish to see him. I can be back within the hour” Tom explained, hoping Knebel would fall for it.
“You can, but Lüftmacher will accompany you”
His plan had failed, unless he could distract his escort..
“Tomas” Knebel announced to the boy “I will go and get Lüftmacher now.”
Knebel left the room, but returned soon after with a well built man.
“Hello Tomas, I am Frederik Lüftmacher” The man said, winking at Tom, causing a chill to descend down his spine
Tom and Frederik left the manor, perched on a high hill, in the middle of a small but friendly and welcoming village.
“So, Tomas, how has Knebel been treating you?” Frederik asked the smart dressed slave
“F-fair, but I feel I am being mistreated. I asked him not to publicly humiliate me, and he has gone against my wish.” Tomas said, looking worried, “Please don’t tell him that.. He will punish me for speaking my mind!”
“Don’t worry, I won’t say a thing” Frederik calmly said, and walked on.
About 20 minutes later, Frederik and Tomas arrived at the house that Knebel believed belonged to one of Tomas’ friends.
“Go on then” Frederik told the boy
“I-I can’t do this. I wanted to escape. He has been mistreating me. I deserve respect aswell, even if it is just a minimal amount!”
Frederik grabbed his arm and handed him two slips of paper.
“Put the green one somewhere safe. The other is to give to Knebel..” Frederik instructed, as he led the boy into a shop. “Wiliam! Look after this boy for a second!”
Frederik left the shop, leaving the slave with a stumpy, chubby butcher. He returned a few moments later with a suitcase, but when Tomas enquired about the new addition to his escorts bags, he was silenced.
“Knebel cannot know about anything you have seen here.” Frederik whispered to the slave as they approached the wrought iron gates securing the Manor where both were residing.