Sexybabe16
11-06-2009, 12:36 AM
This my first story, so id love constructive critism!
Ashleigh, the most popular and mean girl in school, sat at her computer, logging onto getdare. Her username was Ash16babe and she was looking for a mistress. She had the house to herself these holidays.
Carmina, a girl who Ashleigh hates, also logged onto getdare and noticed Ash16babe's add for a mistress. Her username is C-mistress She smiled to her self and pmed her, this is what she said.
Hi Ash16Babe, I am looking for a female slave, who has a webcam. If you do, pm me back and we can start straight away.'
Ashleigh opened up the pm from C-mistress and replied straight away. 'Add me on [email protected] and ill get on webcam.' She repiled.
Carmina got onto [email protected] and added her straight away.
THE CONVERSATION
C- Hi
A- Hey
C- You promise to obey me at all times
A- I do
c- Good! Now get on webcam
A - Opens up webcam
C - Some rules before we start
1. You must always call me Miss or Mistress
2. Dont hesitate or you will be punished
3. Dont be rude
4.. You are mine , dont be afraid
A- Yes Miss
C- Good you dirty little lady. Strip
A - Strips I have Miss
C - Move the webcam down so i can see your pussy. Masturbate now!
A Starts to masturbate
C - When you are about to cum, stop
After 7 minutes
A- I have stopped
C- Good now pack a bag and i expect you at 3 Rinley Avenue in 40 minutes!
What do you think so far?
Ashleigh, the most popular and mean girl in school, sat at her computer, logging onto getdare. Her username was Ash16babe and she was looking for a mistress. She had the house to herself these holidays.
Carmina, a girl who Ashleigh hates, also logged onto getdare and noticed Ash16babe's add for a mistress. Her username is C-mistress She smiled to her self and pmed her, this is what she said.
Hi Ash16Babe, I am looking for a female slave, who has a webcam. If you do, pm me back and we can start straight away.'
Ashleigh opened up the pm from C-mistress and replied straight away. 'Add me on [email protected] and ill get on webcam.' She repiled.
Carmina got onto [email protected] and added her straight away.
THE CONVERSATION
C- Hi
A- Hey
C- You promise to obey me at all times
A- I do
c- Good! Now get on webcam
A - Opens up webcam
C - Some rules before we start
1. You must always call me Miss or Mistress
2. Dont hesitate or you will be punished
3. Dont be rude
4.. You are mine , dont be afraid
A- Yes Miss
C- Good you dirty little lady. Strip
A - Strips I have Miss
C - Move the webcam down so i can see your pussy. Masturbate now!
A Starts to masturbate
C - When you are about to cum, stop
After 7 minutes
A- I have stopped
C- Good now pack a bag and i expect you at 3 Rinley Avenue in 40 minutes!
What do you think so far?