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jono mckenzie
10-29-2009, 04:28 PM
this is my first story.. so it probably wont be any good.
im just bored and i thought this would be a good way to get rid of some of my boredom and entertain you lot. :)
i also appologise for grammar now. :)



Matt and Charlie are both 16 and go to high school togheter and there best friends. Matt is fairly short but he's one of the most popular guys at school, he's the top football player, the girls fancy him and the guys want to be him. He has blonde and an amazingly fit, tanned body. Charlie is pretty tall, quite attractive but likes to keep himself to himself. He is liked at school but doesn't really have a high profile. He is tanned and has a fairly toned body but not a full six pack.

Charlie sat on the school field with a bunch of guys he knew, he wasn't exactly joining in on the banter but he didn't feel out of place. He was sitting there watching Matt playing a game of football with the school team. Matt supported Charlie on his success with his football but at the same time he was quite jealous that he couldn't really play any sport, the only thing he was good at was drama. Charlie got all the lead parts in the school plays and loved to sing and act, and because of this everyone took the mickey out of him and would call him gay. He was liked by everyone so no body said it in a vicious way but they all had suspicions that he was bent.. and to be honest there suspicions were true.

Matt jogged over to the group sitting on the field and Charlie lobbed Matt his water bottle then Charlie followed Matt and the rest of the football team into the locker room. Because people thought Matt was gay a couple of the 'rebel' type took the piss out of him just sitting there watching them change but most of them didnt mind. Matt and the others in the team bundled on to the benches in the locker room and started to whip of there kit.

He got down to his black Calvin Klein briefs which everyone thought was cool. Matt was the only one who wore briefs at school, the rest thought it was cool but were too scared to wear them. He stood there in his briefs cleaning his boots and talking to Charlie.. while Charlie was sitting there starring at Matts beautiful sweaty, dirty body. Matt had dried mud on his face and in his spikey hair and had sweaty pouring off his body and all around his thighs, Matt had a huge bulge showing in his tight black briefs and had a dark blonde snail trail lead up out of his pubic hair which Charlie couldnt stop starring at.. Matt then took off his briefs and joined the rest of the team in the shower. Charlies boner was going insane!


(please give me some feed back, ive never written a story before so i would appreciate it. also add me on msn if you would like to. :) )

jono mckenzie
10-29-2009, 04:45 PM
just realised its not supposed to be in mature stories.. SORRY.
someone move if you want. :)

haxial
10-29-2009, 04:46 PM
Amazing so far, please continue... if it continues XD XD

jono mckenzie
10-30-2009, 05:52 PM
PART 2.

Matt came out of the shower dripping wet, he grabed his towel and started to ruffell up his hair leaving his privates fully on show. It was huge.. Charlie was so jealous or how big Matts cock was.. and it wasnt even erect. He would just stand there bollock naked not even embarassed. He dried off his body and started to rub baby oil over his skin, down his tanned arms, over his biceps, around his nipples, on his chest, and just above where the pubic region started. "do you mind doing my back dude?"
"sure thing" Charlie took the bottle of baby oil and started rubbing it very very gently on Matts back. "c'mon, harder, harder." Charlie had a ragging boner in his trousers. He rubbed the oil firmly over Matts shoulders, and down his back.. Charlie started to get embarassed when he got to the bottom of Matts back. "am i done then?" "nah, could you do my arse mate, i cant reach and i want it keeping peachy dont i" then Matt winked at Charlie. He slowly like a feather lightly dusted the oil over his bum cheeks.. then he went for it.. massaging the oil in roughly. "corr thanks mate that was super." then Matt turned around with his shiny skin, grabbed Charlie and pulled him in for a hug. Charlie was so so aroused at this.. the fittest guy in school was hugging him naked. They broke apart and Matt started talking.. "So, you coming round my place tonight after school? Parents are out for the weekend, house all alone.. wanna sleep?" "absolutely mate, be good."

Matt grabbed his black tight briefs out of his gym bag and stuffed his package into them.. he looked gorgeous with his shiny oily tanned skin in his tight black briefs.. so so fit.

The bell rang and the guys dispersed out of the changing room and finished the rest of their day at school.. awaiting the weekend and the sleepover.



Please feed back would be nice guys? :)

haxial
10-30-2009, 06:36 PM
amazing part 2, keep it coming

jono mckenzie
10-31-2009, 02:12 PM
Please someone move from mature stories to normal stories?

Mr. Green
11-01-2009, 05:47 PM
thIs has to be my favorite story yet

DareDevil11
11-01-2009, 06:02 PM
this is by far my fav story so far even though its not finished! :clap:

iTunes
11-01-2009, 11:56 PM
Great story keep it up my dude

jono mckenzie
11-02-2009, 11:20 AM
Thankyou for comments.. much appreciated.

PART 3.

Charlie got home, got changed, grabbed his bag and walked from his house to Matts with his bag on his back contaning his overnight kit. He knocked on the door and Charlie answered still in his school uniform. (Charlie wore his uniform in a 'cool' kind of way, he would always have his first two top buttons undone with his tie slid down half way down his chest. He always rolled his sleeves up, then wore loads of cool wooden beaded bracelets. And we also always had his trousers sagging so you could see his underwear.)
"come in dude, my parents have just left so we got the place to ourseleves."
"yeah, sounds cool." Charlie walked in and took his shoes off. Charlie often wondered why Matt would hang around with a kid like him when everyone in the school wanted to be friends with Matt. They were very very different people; Matt was the cool sports kind who got all the ladies, had rich parents, a huge house, had a bunch of friends, the good looks and was always partying. Charlie was the quieter kind, who had his few select trust worthy friends. His parents weren't exactly poor, but they weren't loaded, and Charlie generally liked to keep himself to himself.

Matt started walking up the huge wooden staircase, "Come up, i gotta get changed." he shouted.
So Charlie followed.
Matts bedroom was huge, it was a square room with a 4 poster double bed in the top left hand corner, he had a big wardrobe in the top right corner and they just cool gadgets like the latest shoes or ipod scatted around his room. He had blue walls which were decorated with all kinds of football posters of tottenham and other football players.
"shall we go into the indoor pool then Charlie?" "sure.. but i forgot my trunks, shall i call my mum to bring them over?" "nahh, dont worry dude, ive got plenty you can borrow." Matt stripped down to his briefs again, went over to his set of draws and flung all the pairs of swimming shorts over his shoulder on to his bed. "Im not wearing any of them! there well tight!!" Matt said and looked embarassed. "jeez dude it dont matter, its only me and you here."
"fine" Charlie picked up the first pair in reach with such an embarassed face.
"What pair do you think i should wear then?" Matt went over to his pile of swimwear and started looking through the bunch.. he came to a pair of tiny bright blue speedos. "No thanks!" he said and chucked them over his shoulder. "If i have to wear a pair of your tight trunks then you can wear them!!" said Charlie. "But i wore them when i was like 10.. there tiny dude!"
"oh well.. i dare ya!" "fine.. it doesnt really bother me he said." so Matt picked the blue speedos off the floor, removed his briefs showing off his huge package and put on the speedos.. and you could see a HUGE bulge through them. Matt gave Charlie a cheeky smile. "Come on then.. get yours on."
"alright.. wheres your bathroom?" "Jeez you pussy.. you dont need to get changed in the bathroom.. what you got a shriveled dick or something?! just get changed here. its only me and you!" Charlies face had gone bright red and he was so embarassed. He removed his shirt revelling his perfect body, he then removed his jeans. He was standing there in just his white boxers.. he was so embarassed.. this was the final step. He whipped off his boxers revelling his pubes and dick which was actually a pretty good size and nothing to be embarassed off. He put on his trunks fast as lightening.. even though you could see a bulge Charlie was trying to forget about that. "There.. im done, quick lets go." Charlie was really embarassed but at the same time he was buzzing with such an adreneline.

They walked down to the indoor pool in there swimming costumes and dived into the pool..

myswagga
11-02-2009, 02:11 PM
plz continue this is great

nuditydudity
11-03-2009, 11:01 PM
PLEASE KEEP GOING! This has got me hooked, and I need to know more!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

kinky
11-04-2009, 10:33 AM
wow i live near you lol

jono mckenzie
11-05-2009, 09:57 AM
PART 4:

At first they were just casually, hanging out, swimming lengths, but after about an hour they both got bored so Matt
asked Charlie if he wanted to go into the stream room. "Yeah, sure, we can chat and dry off." said Charlie.
They both hopped out of the pool in there tight swim wear, Charlie tried to cover his bulge as he got out.
They went into the steam room and Charlie just sat down on the wooden bench.. "What ya doing Charlie?"
"What?" Matt laughed.. "you dont wear your swim wear in a steam room, your supposed to dry off naked."
So Matt took off his speedos and flicked them at Charlie. "Go on Charlie..just sit here, with me naked!"
Charlie wanted to do it, but he was afraid that sitting naked with his best friend who was the most fittest person he knew
would give him a hard on. "Go on Charlie.. you dared me to put the speedos on, so i dare you to sit here naked!"
He did it.. Charlie took off his skin tight trunks and shoved them in Matts face. "There ya go!"
Charlie was so embarassed but was so happy that he did it. They both sat there naked chatting about school and stuff. The room was so steamy
that they could only just about see each others faces, so they couldnt see there own privates, let alone each others.
Charlie got pretty comfortable sitting naked with Matt, and he was also pretty excited that he was sitting with a fit guy naked.. but he wanted
to go further.. "Hey, Matt, if you want to.. we could like, go in to your room and play.. erm.. truth or dare?"
"awesome idea dude, grab your trunks.. lets go, we dont need to put them on to go outside though." then Matt winked at Charlie in a cheeky way.
When they got outside the cold immedietly hit them because they'd just come out a boiling hot room, and they could also seach eachothers
package very veey clearly. But luckly because it was cold Charlie wasn't 'excited' so he didnt have anything to be embarassed by.

They walked up stairs and got dressed back into there clothes then went into Matts room, Charlie layed down in the middle of Charlies double
bed and Charlie went to put his stero on. "So, right, Charlie.. TORD?" "err.. truth" Charlie was too nervous to automatically pick dare
first go. "explain the way you wank off dude!" Charlie was embarassed but thought that it could have been worse.. he was quite scared that
he would end up revelling his sexuality by the end of the night. "well, most the time i lay on my bed, completly naked, turn on porn and
wank off then try and shoot up my chest as high as i can." "haha, nice one dudeee. what kind of porn do you watch?"
Charlie obviously watched gay porn.. but he didnt want to tell Matt this. "erm, erm, you've already asked me my truth.. im not answering that!"
"fine dude, fine." "So Matt, TORD?" "i'll have a truth aswell." Charlie tried to think of a good truth.. "since we know that your such a girl,
like oiling your skin after gym and stuff, what other stuff do you do to yourself?" "aah, dude.. embarassing! well, i oil my body at least
once aday after i shower. i moisturise my face and arms. i shave my face every day to keep it smooth. i also shave around my nipples and my
chest, of course i keep my snail trail though. i also shave the top of my pubes to keep them neat.. and thats pretty much all i do!"
You could tell that Matt was actually pretty embarassed at this, but he tried to keep his cool.
"Back to you Charlie.. TORD?" Charlie didnt want to pick truth cause then he would have to say that he watched gay porn. "erm.. fine,
i'll pick dare.."

haxial
11-05-2009, 10:14 AM
Oh my god

continue!!!

sailorman3217
11-05-2009, 07:12 PM
Amazing... Simply amazing

slavedareboy
11-06-2009, 06:26 AM
Cool man. One problem. I ONLY SEE 4 UPDATES. THERE NEEDS TO BE MOAR!!!!!

jono mckenzie
11-06-2009, 03:50 PM
PART 5:

Charlie was dreading what the dare was gonna be since he was a shy quite chap. No one had even seen him naked since today.
Matt came out with the dare straight away, he didnt even need to think about it.. "i dare you to give me a hand job!"
Charlie was speechless. He never expected Matt to have given that as a dare. "WHAT!? dude.. are you serious?" "yeah mate, you've gotta give me a hand job until i cum." "erm, fair enough." Charlie was extremely nervous but at the same time incredibly excited and so turnt on since he was giving the hottest guy at school and hand job. Matt un buttoned his shirt completely and pulled his jeans and briefs down to his ankles then layed down on the bed with his hands behind his head showing off his armpits. "jerk me away the dude!" Charlie slowly held Matts dick with a very weak grip. He pulled it up and down a bit but it wasnt going much since he was putting no effort because he was so embarassed. "c'mon maaan, im never gonna cum at this rate!" so Charlie grabbed Matts dick with all his strenght and wanked his as fast as he could. Matt started making groaning noises, after about 5 minutes the groans got louder and he started to curl his toes. Then suddenly he exploded and his cum went all up his chest over his nipples and even up his neck. Then Matt gave out a sigh or relieve. He wipped the cum and sweat off his chest with some tissues. Then he sat up.. "my oh my Charlie, its looks like you enjoyed that as much as i did!" Then Matt pointed to Matts crotch then Matt looked down and saw that he had a raging hard on.
He turned bright red and tried to hide it. "No need to be embarasses big boy.. i suggest you pick dare next and i'll see if i can sort it out." then Matt gave Charlie another cheeky wink. "so, TORD Charlie?" "dare i guess."
"your my slave for the night. no more truth or dare, you will be doing EVERYTHING i tell you. understand?" Charlie was in COMPLETE shock. He stared at Matt and gave him a slight nod with excitment. "good boy.."


(sorry its a bit short. Is this story worth carrying on or is it getting boring and not going any where? lol. suggestions would be helpful if anyone has any? )

Robbo!
11-06-2009, 04:02 PM
YES IT'S WORTH CONTINUING!!!!

This is great! Keep it coming!

slavedareboy
11-06-2009, 11:37 PM
Why ask questions like that when you know the answer?


Incase you haven't worked it out yet, the answer is YES!!!!

myswagga
11-10-2009, 06:27 PM
finish it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

DareDevil11
11-11-2009, 06:59 PM
u definitely should finish!

Shadow1537
11-12-2009, 10:08 PM
you have to finish this. com on dont leave us hanging.

Noquestions
11-15-2009, 01:12 PM
Its quite good, only complaint is the names, you keeping getting them muddled up, so doesnt make sense.

" Then Matt pointed to Matts crotch then Matt looked down "

Really enjoy it reading, but when I read that, it interupts the flow of things since makes little sense.

Sorry, but keep up good work, its very good.

kinky
11-16-2009, 11:32 AM
Finish this please ;)

DareDevil11
11-22-2009, 06:14 PM
continue! please continue!

sailorman3217
11-28-2009, 12:42 PM
Finish the story!! i absolutely hate it wen people never finish what they started :(

will9022
12-11-2009, 05:22 PM
this story is sooo good and definitely worth continuing

one problem- u skipped matt TORD, you had charlie give matt a handjob, then matt asked charlie agian... wat about matt??

Captain Harkness
12-29-2009, 02:53 PM
Continue!!! It's brilliant.

TeenSlave
01-05-2010, 08:10 PM
please finish the story dude :)

Duck
01-05-2010, 09:10 PM
Good story want to know more

glue
01-08-2010, 03:20 AM
Literally that is the first time i have read this story through

And its the best story i have read in such a long time, to end it now would be terrible, the audience (and me :)) need some more :)

10/10!!!!!!

jono mckenzie
01-08-2010, 06:33 AM
Im genuinely SO sorry for waiting such along time to finish the story.
I recieved a rude comment from someone about the story so i thought 'well then theres no point carrying on then!' but for those who ARE enjoying the story, i will continue it.

i promise the next part will be written either later today, or tomorrow.

thanks for your comments. :) :)

Shmushie
01-09-2010, 04:39 PM
Thanks for carrying on with this story Jono Mckenzie, this is by far one of the best stories i have read on getDare! Welldone!

Kind regards, Shmushie :)

will9022
01-09-2010, 05:31 PM
YES!!! i love this story so much, and to hear that you are continuing it makes me sooooooo happy!!!

will9022
01-14-2010, 04:16 PM
Common!!!! CONTINUE PLEASE!!!

davidhbk123
01-14-2010, 04:36 PM
this is my first story.. so it probably wont be any good.
im just bored and i thought this would be a good way to get rid of some of my boredom and entertain you lot. :)
i also appologise for grammar now. :)



Matt and Charlie are both 16 and go to high school togheter and there best friends. Matt is fairly short but he's one of the most popular guys at school, he's the top football player, the girls fancy him and the guys want to be him. He has blonde and an amazingly fit, tanned body. Charlie is pretty tall, quite attractive but likes to keep himself to himself. He is liked at school but doesn't really have a high profile. He is tanned and has a fairly toned body but not a full six pack.

Charlie sat on the school field with a bunch of guys he knew, he wasn't exactly joining in on the banter but he didn't feel out of place. He was sitting there watching Matt playing a game of football with the school team. Matt supported Charlie on his success with his football but at the same time he was quite jealous that he couldn't really play any sport, the only thing he was good at was drama. Charlie got all the lead parts in the school plays and loved to sing and act, and because of this everyone took the mickey out of him and would call him gay. He was liked by everyone so no body said it in a vicious way but they all had suspicions that he was bent.. and to be honest there suspicions were true.

Matt jogged over to the group sitting on the field and Charlie lobbed Matt his water bottle then Charlie followed Matt and the rest of the football team into the locker room. Because people thought Matt was gay a couple of the 'rebel' type took the piss out of him just sitting there watching them change but most of them didnt mind. Matt and the others in the team bundled on to the benches in the locker room and started to whip of there kit.

He got down to his black Calvin Klein briefs which everyone thought was cool. Matt was the only one who wore briefs at school, the rest thought it was cool but were too scared to wear them. He stood there in his briefs cleaning his boots and talking to Charlie.. while Charlie was sitting there starring at Matts beautiful sweaty, dirty body. Matt had dried mud on his face and in his spikey hair and had sweaty pouring off his body and all around his thighs, Matt had a huge bulge showing in his tight black briefs and had a dark blonde snail trail lead up out of his pubic hair which Charlie couldnt stop starring at.. Matt then took off his briefs and joined the rest of the team in the shower. Charlies boner was going insane!


(please give me some feed back, ive never written a story before so i would appreciate it. also add me on msn if you would like to. :) ) awsome i would love to meet u

Bangin
01-16-2010, 07:44 PM
there needs to be more!!

zach139
01-22-2010, 03:04 PM
good story please write more

Jason242
01-23-2010, 06:09 AM
yes!!!!!!!1 thank you.. iv waited sooooooo long for this rest of this story!!!!!!!! i cant wait